Like the story for a bit, but definitely not Marcus one bit. It's really obvious he has something to do with the disappearance, I say that because it's obvious now that his obstacle is gone he can get what he wants. Not only that but Cal hasn't had any time what so ever to process what happened and is obviously being pushed in a certain direction by everyone, except for Lupe. It just extremally feels like Cal is being taken advantage of and no one around him is helping him what so ever and the only person who could really help him, Lupe and David, are no where to be found. Hopefully someone actually helps him and finds David before it gets too late for both him and Cal
Hrm... the sprites may need to be redone (eventually), the dad is a must, looks too young to be a dad as is (he looks too much like the others/not enough to make him looks sperate/unique from them). What does Callum look like, species? (There is an image and I'm assuming Raccoon, but that is just it, I'm assuming, its not verified, verification does happen but WAY later). I get the feeling like this is a different viewpoint on "If Echo was done right", everyone is being concerned and everyone is asking mostly the right questions AND taking things seriously, they aren't all looking for stupid excuses, pisses me off when others can't be responsible and reasonable. Love the XP and XD expressions! I've never played Ace Attorney, but that was really cute! My Mom loves L&O SVU, is props the right term then? X/3
Woah! Woof! And wow...
Love all the references hare and there littered about! X3 Every time I catch my breathe I just lose it all over again!
Aw would have loved an image of that Husky Husky! X/3
Not too simple, not too complex and overly overthinking writing, this is perfect. I would say I tried it out t just he right time for maximum effect. I would most certainly say you have already done more than enough for me to want to donate to help further. I shall do so with the next update. This really stands to hit all the right positive and negative places as to feel a content balance.
if you've seen the scene when Troy and Marcus play Street Fighter against each other in Ch.1 you'd know what Callum looks like because he's standing behind Marcus and Troy in the CG
and just to add, i dont rlly think it matters what species he is! i also never explicitly say Troy is a fox, or that Karina is a cat, but their species isnt exactly relevant to the story ahaha, i understand if they wanted clarification tho!
ouch, the latest chapter hit way too close two home fur me- but it was amazingly well written, i could really feel callum's emotions- especially since the stuff his mother said to him were, word for word, stuff my own 'mother' said to me, but it was nicely balanced out with the cute fluffy romance! that ending was so wholesome and cute though..... i hope callum and marcus' relationship is a happy and healthy one ;w; <3
im still in the middle of reading thru act 2, but i really love this vn so far!! i relate a lot to callum- being a transmasc nonbinary purrson, i hope its ok fur me two purrsonally headcanon him as nonbinary too since i relate to him so much hehe i love the allll the characters so far, and the art style makes me feel oddly nostalgic, in a good way! the mewsic has a nice feel to it in efurry situation, n im curious two see where the story ends up!! <3 edit: also, i feel like the bit with aster and callum at the party might warrant a content warning?? sorry, i hope i dont come across as too forceful or anything since its your story, the reading the situation just made me anxious and panicky ;w; also, also, did yew take the photos fur the backgrounds yewrself?? i think its purretty charming havin 3d backgrounds and 2d characters!!
Uuuuh Big bug(dot big I think I dont make these so I wouldnt know) but when in the truck with whats his face and its talking about "Hes Gonna think we FICKED" there is a Error so it says a messed up comman
I really enjoyed reading the first chapter. I do have a question however; Is Marcus the only one romancable? The first chapter is just mainly interactions between Callum and Marcus(which I don't mind one bit since he's the one I'm going for) and there are definitely intimate moments with him. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. The VN is also really well made for a one man team, so props to you for that! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
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Like the story for a bit, but definitely not Marcus one bit. It's really obvious he has something to do with the disappearance, I say that because it's obvious now that his obstacle is gone he can get what he wants. Not only that but Cal hasn't had any time what so ever to process what happened and is obviously being pushed in a certain direction by everyone, except for Lupe. It just extremally feels like Cal is being taken advantage of and no one around him is helping him what so ever and the only person who could really help him, Lupe and David, are no where to be found. Hopefully someone actually helps him and finds David before it gets too late for both him and Cal
Hrm... the sprites may need to be redone (eventually), the dad is a must, looks too young to be a dad as is (he looks too much like the others/not enough to make him looks sperate/unique from them). What does Callum look like, species? (There is an image and I'm assuming Raccoon, but that is just it, I'm assuming, its not verified, verification does happen but WAY later). I get the feeling like this is a different viewpoint on "If Echo was done right", everyone is being concerned and everyone is asking mostly the right questions AND taking things seriously, they aren't all looking for stupid excuses, pisses me off when others can't be responsible and reasonable. Love the XP and XD expressions! I've never played Ace Attorney, but that was really cute! My Mom loves L&O SVU, is props the right term then? X/3
Woah! Woof! And wow...
Love all the references hare and there littered about! X3 Every time I catch my breathe I just lose it all over again!
Aw would have loved an image of that Husky Husky! X/3
Not too simple, not too complex and overly overthinking writing, this is perfect. I would say I tried it out t just he right time for maximum effect. I would most certainly say you have already done more than enough for me to want to donate to help further. I shall do so with the next update. This really stands to hit all the right positive and negative places as to feel a content balance.
if you've seen the scene when Troy and Marcus play Street Fighter against each other in Ch.1 you'd know what Callum looks like because he's standing behind Marcus and Troy in the CG
I already said that, but there is no TEXTUAL confirmation, so for all I know he could be a tanuki
he's a raccoon! the dev confirmed it down below in the comments
and just to add, i dont rlly think it matters what species he is! i also never explicitly say Troy is a fox, or that Karina is a cat, but their species isnt exactly relevant to the story ahaha, i understand if they wanted clarification tho!
ouch, the latest chapter hit way too close two home fur me- but it was amazingly well written, i could really feel callum's emotions- especially since the stuff his mother said to him were, word for word, stuff my own 'mother' said to me, but it was nicely balanced out with the cute fluffy romance!
that ending was so wholesome and cute though..... i hope callum and marcus' relationship is a happy and healthy one ;w; <3
Also a W to Konpeitocat for keeping up with a chapter each month :)
-Plays the vn
-The story intensifies
-wild Love trial/Romeo&Cinderella starts playing
-Ignores what's happening on the vn and start singing along the beat
Also great VN! Really fun to read.
Konpeitocat you need to start a patreon and a discord server
ive been thinking abt making a patreon! and i'll see abt the discord server, if its a thing people want (*ovo)
Yass!! It will be so much easier to find people there and also talk to others : D
yessssss id love two hav a discord server!! plus we could all share our fanart easily :3c
Amazing VN! Can't wait for more
Oh my god, I need more of this novel, it's super fantastic! ⭐.⭐
im still in the middle of reading thru act 2, but i really love this vn so far!! i relate a lot to callum- being a transmasc nonbinary purrson, i hope its ok fur me two purrsonally headcanon him as nonbinary too since i relate to him so much hehe
i love the allll the characters so far, and the art style makes me feel oddly nostalgic, in a good way! the mewsic has a nice feel to it in efurry situation, n im curious two see where the story ends up!! <3
edit: also, i feel like the bit with aster and callum at the party might warrant a content warning?? sorry, i hope i dont come across as too forceful or anything since its your story, the reading the situation just made me anxious and panicky ;w;
also, also, did yew take the photos fur the backgrounds yewrself?? i think its purretty charming havin 3d backgrounds and 2d characters!!
ty!! i dont mind you're headcannon at all, and i did end up putting a content warning on the main page, maybe it was too vague tho (qwq)
and i only took one picture of all the backgrounds, everything else i found elsewhere (*=3=)7
im so glad youre enjotying it tho!!
Will there be an Android version?
unfortunately, i cant seem to get it to work for me :< unless someone makes the android build for me, youd have to use joiplay
Okay that's fine
is there multiple love interest>
no, it's just one (*0v0)
Uuuuh Big bug(dot big I think I dont make these so I wouldnt know) but when in the truck with whats his face and its talking about "Hes Gonna think we FICKED" there is a Error so it says a messed up comman
aa yeah i see it, the percent symbol wasnt read by renpy... i'll have it fixed for the next update then (*=A=)
Wait is that an UPDATE!!
Damn... can't wait to see what happened next, what exactly happened to David?
i'm so gonna kill Aster
i loved the court scene
this is soo good i love it
this is really good! im support you if u still continue. hard to find goodstuff nowaday and im sure you earn all the prise. keep it up!
oh damn
I'm looking foward to chapter 4 :D
What are we
And why do we look so small in the one picture
Callum is a raccoon
and he's pretty short compared to his friends
This is really good the charaters are well written I look foward to playing the next chapter
Waaah! T_T all those interruptions! x'D xou did some good story pacing with this update~ UwU very nice~
Will this get a mobile version. I want to see it for its glory
I'll see if i can! My computer is a bit iffy with the internet, so I can't download the mobile converter, but ill try to get it to work!
Meanwhile you can use JoiPlay to emulate the game on Android.
Really love what xou have so far n_n it's got all the good vibes of a homecoming love story, with all the allure of a murder mystery UwU
Nice game also love the art
I really enjoyed reading the first chapter. I do have a question however; Is Marcus the only one romancable? The first chapter is just mainly interactions between Callum and Marcus(which I don't mind one bit since he's the one I'm going for) and there are definitely intimate moments with him. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. The VN is also really well made for a one man team, so props to you for that! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
tyvm! yeah, WIKY is a fairly linear story, and Marcus is the only love interest i have planned for the vn
I love this
It's really enjoyable and interesting
Can't wait for the next chapter
tysm (T_T) that means so much to me <3
Can I translate this VN to Portuguese? :3
yes ofc! as long as u credit me, go right ahead!
Ok ^w^