I still feel like they throw away David,it's kinda unfair to him,at least herun away from those drug shit.too drama,but not enough,maybe kinda convention,i thought it would be better
Everyone loves Marcus or David, but I love Troy, I'm just starting to read the vn but he is the character that caught my attention the most, it's a shame that the novel is only linear, that doesn't take away from its goodness.
PS: I love your work what it feels like it is a gem
I don't usually write reviews so I don't even know where to start...
First of all, thank you very much for creating this VN. It brought a lot of different emotions, told an interesting and attractive story that I didn’t want to tear myself away from. Although, as usual, I had to survive the introduction, but once you get involved, you can’t stop.
Colorful characters, a good selection of atmospheric melodies, its own visual style, an interesting plot and emotional swings do their job, I really liked everything. I've always believed that being able to empathize with characters and experience emotions as if you were somewhere with them is the pinnacle of storytelling. If you laugh when you read jokes, fight back tears when the characters are doing poorly and regret that you cannot cross the screen to the other side to help and correct the situation, then this means that the material in your hands deserves the loudest applause and the most generous praise. And all of the above together, like fireworks, sparkled and rumbled in my heart. And I want to say thank you for setting off fireworks in my heart. I enjoyed it from start to finish.
However, I was left with a feeling of unsaidness. I tried to not spoil anything, but still... Read it at your own risk. The main character sacrificed a lot and made a lot of mistakes while chasing his goal. And when it was completed, most of the problems resolved themselves (although the main character himself intended to fix everything, and in the end he got rid of the source of the problems, but did not fix what was broken in the process). I was really looking forward to seeing Callum correct his mistakes, mend bridges, and maybe even help others deal with their problems. These types of scenes inspire me, make me think about my life, reconsider my priorities and become my best self. But, apparently, such is life - and people often greatly exaggerate, thinking that they need a lot to be happy.
I feel sorry for many of the characters (I don’t want to spoil who), with whom there seemed to be not enough time to deal with them, to bring them to the final point. I feel sorry for the main character, because many whom he could count on had already resigned themselves to the situation and did not support his aspirations, but simply let him do what he wants. As a result, he received more help and information from strangers than from those he knew.
The saddest thing is that the main character does not ask for help from his loved ones under the pretext that he will either get into trouble or believes that they simply will not help him. But everything could have been much simpler. Everyone has secrets from the main character, and only complete strangers agree to help. As they say, friends are made in trouble. So it turns out that many close people are not so close anymore. :(
But this is purely my personal opinion, which, of course, can be challenged. To say that I misunderstood, or am exaggerating, or somewhere I didn’t read one single line where all this is explained. And I will even be glad if there is an explanation for all this. And it most likely exists, but I just feel bad for the main character and a bunch of other people. That all those people whom he values do not value him as much and do not take into account his feelings, goals and desires. And that he does kind of the same with them and other people.
And this is my only quibble, which cannot even be considered a mistake or a minus of this VN. On the contrary, the fact that it bothers me so much is another plus in the collection of advantages of the work. The backgrounds that become familiar, the characters you grow attached to, the music that puts you in the right mood and the story that you live caused a storm of emotions that is difficult to describe in words.
I don't regret a single second that I spent reading this vn. After reading “What it feels like”, I was already sure that this novella would not let me down. And it did not disappoint. Of course, "What it feels like" is a little more personal to me and gets extra points so it holds more of a place in my heart. However, now I have to make room for "When I knew you" too. I simply cannot do otherwise.
OK. That's it, this will be the end, otherwise, knowing myself, I will begin to express the same thought in different words, because I will think that I have not said enough to express myself. In general, I feel strangely ashamed to write reviews, and I don’t know how to use words as well as I would like and I don't know how to finish this text. Therefore... Pun. How to praise beautiful exposed wires? Just say they are electrocute.
I fell in love with this vn so so much that I got attached to all the characters especially David, I thought he and Callum would end up together but no , I felt bad for David 😭 but I still love the ending though 10/10
Simplemente una de las mejores novelas visuales. realmente estoy conmovida por todo lo que pasó, derramé muchas lágrimas TwT. ¡Gracias creador! Sin ti nunca tendríamos esta obra de arte :)
Ridiculously underrated vn and vn developer. I've played a few fvns lol but the writing of this is genuinely exceptional. Some of the best romance writing I've ever seen and the MYSTERY?? THE MYSTERY??? I was hooked! It's so hard to find finished fvns and I'm genuinely shocked I hadn't heard of this, I had to find it on Patreon after getting hooked on What It Feels Like. If you're on the fence or whatever, do yourself a favor and play this immediately.
I really loved it everything about it i just imagen marcus and cal meets again in the future and the whole gang back together over all this was great (*ﾟ∀ﾟ)っ (*つ´･∀･)つ
Spoiler Warning. Do not read if you have not played through the VN Already I am talking about my thoughts on this game.
I enjoyed the realism in this story or about as real as a love story between two lovers with one trying to solve a mystery could get. I am so glad that it did not go down the I found this guy and it will all be fine but rather a more real world approach... Albeit a bit scuffed with some of the story points through it. I did enjoy the going and finding david though I feel the entire interaction with him was a bit scuffed including the part where they arived at Marcuses house... Kinda felt like a Yandere thing and it just didn't feel resolved. Though if that was plan then good job and I can totally see that being the plan like not ever story has to be resolved or come to a wonderful outcome. Sometimes life is about taking what you can get and focusing on those who actually care or you and are willing to accept you and those who you love instead of the abusive friendship that won't end well. Another thing I enjoyed was how the drama with the mother was short and sweet not over staying its welcome. Albeit the thing with it getting aster on our side was a bit scuff but I understand needing a way that is some what believable that would make the characters might want to interact. Speaking of one parent to the next same thing with dad why he was there he was not a major role that was constantly on screen rather taking the supporting back role there to cheer the main character up. It goes to show how parents have so little actually in our lives later on but also want to still be there even if thier not sure how. And it goes to show the contrast between a good parent and a bad one. The ending was sweet but about what about what i expected out of this well one of the two options I assumed when they talked about last year. (The other was they ended up going to the same college BS) But I am glad it went this path and it was sweet. I downloaded it for the love story got more interested in and stayed interested for the mystery and left with both a mystery and a somewhat sweet love story.
I loveeed this story, it was so beautifully done! I loved how the characters were not perfect but still very lovable, I laughed and cried while reading this. I know that you just finished and you should take some time to yourself but I will definitely play anything that you pull out cuz I just loved your writing style and how you portray your characters <3
-Spoiler-
for me the only thing that left me with a sour taste was how the mc handled the situation with his ex, I know that he was trying to get through his thick skull once and for all that they were done but at the same time he was an addict and didn't have a support system so I think mc could have emphasize more how he still care for him as a friend, how his sister is still waiting for him, so maybe he could have fleed the town after talking with his sister and explained how he is going to get treatment and comeback or something like that, I just feel that he kind gave up on him and he was the only person besides his little sister that he could count on, I know it's not his problem and he shouldn't have to go thru all this for his ex but at the same time I think it would be more fitting to his personality and would be less sad cuz after the talk that they had I just kept thinking about how he is probably going to loose to the drugs and how his little sister may never see him again :c but at the same time, this is your story to tell so you should do you, I just needed to put my two cents on this cuz I loved how everything else came about, I hope this don't come off as meaning or arrogant but english is not my native language so just know that if sounded bad it wasn't my intention haha hope you are doing fine and happy with how everything came about, you did an amazing job <3
God... Chapter 10 KILLED me T____T I was so badly on edge! xD wow, what great writing xou've put into the 2econd act of xour VN :) especially with Callum's mother ;)
I've enjoyed this tale from the very 1irst build, and it's been amazing to follow xour progress as a writer n__n this story has such deep emotions in it, and xou pervay them so well that I feel each and every 1ne perfectly~ UwU
I CANNOT wait for the conclusion, and will likely re-read a few earlier chapters to get that whole build up going~ :p thank xou SOOOO much for sharing xour tale with us, it's been a freaking wild ride :)
well ive thought abt it, but im not really sure how to set one up properly... maybe if i had someone to help me run it, since i dont use discord too often, but its def something id like to do! :0
I just started playing this and god I related to Callum so much just as much for the MC in Socially Awkward. Watching people talked really do feel like you watching a love sitcom. Though my heart fucking drop when Karina told Callum she love Marcus. I'm a basic bitch that love basic cliché of Jock x Nerd, Marcus is really the ideal VN love interest to me and the fact that this chick who I love cause her personality is total diva, said she love him means possible friendship ender for the best girl there ever is. And I can't. I don't care if it's spoiler, please tell me Callum will still be friend with Karina if he ended up with Marcus.
Excuse me, But you are using copyright music. That can be a legal and court troubles for you (Specially when your patreon is involve), can i ask you to remove it?. Many also have the same worry with the music.
I used joiplay to play this again and I reread ch 1-6 and just started on ch 7 and holy fuck the change in art style gave me fucking whiplash (im kinda simping for the new Mr Diaz Cg ngl)
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I still feel like they throw away David,it's kinda unfair to him,at least herun away from those drug shit.too drama,but not enough,maybe kinda convention,i thought it would be better
is this still being worked on?
it’s completed! no updates planned :]
i promised myself i would play this game someday (this promise was made since the game got released lol), next week ill give it a try
This vn really made me emotional. All i can say is that it was awsome, 10/10
Everyone loves Marcus or David, but I love Troy, I'm just starting to read the vn but he is the character that caught my attention the most, it's a shame that the novel is only linear, that doesn't take away from its goodness.
PS: I love your work what it feels like it is a gem
i know where that fort is wtf
i genuinely cried from this game, I love the art style and how depressing yet heartwarming it makes you feel. 10/10, love this game
I don't usually write reviews so I don't even know where to start...
First of all, thank you very much for creating this VN. It brought a lot of different emotions, told an interesting and attractive story that I didn’t want to tear myself away from. Although, as usual, I had to survive the introduction, but once you get involved, you can’t stop.
Colorful characters, a good selection of atmospheric melodies, its own visual style, an interesting plot and emotional swings do their job, I really liked everything. I've always believed that being able to empathize with characters and experience emotions as if you were somewhere with them is the pinnacle of storytelling. If you laugh when you read jokes, fight back tears when the characters are doing poorly and regret that you cannot cross the screen to the other side to help and correct the situation, then this means that the material in your hands deserves the loudest applause and the most generous praise. And all of the above together, like fireworks, sparkled and rumbled in my heart. And I want to say thank you for setting off fireworks in my heart. I enjoyed it from start to finish.
However, I was left with a feeling of unsaidness. I tried to not spoil anything, but still... Read it at your own risk. The main character sacrificed a lot and made a lot of mistakes while chasing his goal. And when it was completed, most of the problems resolved themselves (although the main character himself intended to fix everything, and in the end he got rid of the source of the problems, but did not fix what was broken in the process). I was really looking forward to seeing Callum correct his mistakes, mend bridges, and maybe even help others deal with their problems. These types of scenes inspire me, make me think about my life, reconsider my priorities and become my best self. But, apparently, such is life - and people often greatly exaggerate, thinking that they need a lot to be happy.
I feel sorry for many of the characters (I don’t want to spoil who), with whom there seemed to be not enough time to deal with them, to bring them to the final point. I feel sorry for the main character, because many whom he could count on had already resigned themselves to the situation and did not support his aspirations, but simply let him do what he wants. As a result, he received more help and information from strangers than from those he knew.
The saddest thing is that the main character does not ask for help from his loved ones under the pretext that he will either get into trouble or believes that they simply will not help him. But everything could have been much simpler. Everyone has secrets from the main character, and only complete strangers agree to help. As they say, friends are made in trouble. So it turns out that many close people are not so close anymore. :(
But this is purely my personal opinion, which, of course, can be challenged. To say that I misunderstood, or am exaggerating, or somewhere I didn’t read one single line where all this is explained. And I will even be glad if there is an explanation for all this. And it most likely exists, but I just feel bad for the main character and a bunch of other people. That all those people whom he values do not value him as much and do not take into account his feelings, goals and desires. And that he does kind of the same with them and other people.
And this is my only quibble, which cannot even be considered a mistake or a minus of this VN. On the contrary, the fact that it bothers me so much is another plus in the collection of advantages of the work. The backgrounds that become familiar, the characters you grow attached to, the music that puts you in the right mood and the story that you live caused a storm of emotions that is difficult to describe in words.
I don't regret a single second that I spent reading this vn. After reading “What it feels like”, I was already sure that this novella would not let me down. And it did not disappoint. Of course, "What it feels like" is a little more personal to me and gets extra points so it holds more of a place in my heart. However, now I have to make room for "When I knew you" too. I simply cannot do otherwise.
OK. That's it, this will be the end, otherwise, knowing myself, I will begin to express the same thought in different words, because I will think that I have not said enough to express myself. In general, I feel strangely ashamed to write reviews, and I don’t know how to use words as well as I would like and I don't know how to finish this text. Therefore... Pun. How to praise beautiful exposed wires? Just say they are electrocute.
:/
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Forget what I said.
I haven't played this VN yet... This is far to long of a review, anyway this has interested me in playing, thanks :l
lol literally my thoughts before they had time to be my thought
In my opinion this VN is a 11/10 and I would really like a story after this one .The epilogue of WIKY Would be interesting
Love this VN
I fell in love with this vn so so much that I got attached to all the characters especially David, I thought he and Callum would end up together but no , I felt bad for David 😭 but I still love the ending though 10/10
Simplemente una de las mejores novelas visuales. realmente estoy conmovida por todo lo que pasó, derramé muchas lágrimas TwT. ¡Gracias creador! Sin ti nunca tendríamos esta obra de arte :)
muchas gracias!! me alegra mucho que te haya gustado tanto <3
Ridiculously underrated vn and vn developer. I've played a few fvns lol but the writing of this is genuinely exceptional. Some of the best romance writing I've ever seen and the MYSTERY?? THE MYSTERY??? I was hooked! It's so hard to find finished fvns and I'm genuinely shocked I hadn't heard of this, I had to find it on Patreon after getting hooked on What It Feels Like. If you're on the fence or whatever, do yourself a favor and play this immediately.
this is literally the nicest comment ive ever gotten qwq ty sososo much, your words mean the world to me…!!!!
Ok, your comment convinced me
Okay I love this game but.....this might be weird but I would've chose David DONT BLAME ME I enjoyed him sad I couldn't
I NEED MORREEEE
I really loved it everything about it i just imagen marcus and cal meets again in the future and the whole gang back together over all this was great (*ﾟ∀ﾟ)っ (*つ´･∀･)つ
The VN looks realy cool, but i have a Android phone...
android build is up!! :>
Thanks!!! 😊
Marcus and Callum should let Baxter in on the fun sometime cuz that boy is the unsung hero of this story and he deserves a thank you BJ. >w>
i think you might get your wish sooner than you think (owo)b
wait how many routes are there?
just one, its a linear visual novel :]
Spoiler Warning. Do not read if you have not played through the VN Already I am talking about my thoughts on this game.
I enjoyed the realism in this story or about as real as a love story between two lovers with one trying to solve a mystery could get.
I am so glad that it did not go down the I found this guy and it will all be fine but rather a more real world approach... Albeit a bit scuffed with some of the story points through it.
I did enjoy the going and finding david though I feel the entire interaction with him was a bit scuffed including the part where they arived at Marcuses house... Kinda felt like a Yandere thing and it just didn't feel resolved. Though if that was plan then good job and I can totally see that being the plan like not ever story has to be resolved or come to a wonderful outcome.
Sometimes life is about taking what you can get and focusing on those who actually care or you and are willing to accept you and those who you love instead of the abusive friendship that won't end well.
Another thing I enjoyed was how the drama with the mother was short and sweet not over staying its welcome.
Albeit the thing with it getting aster on our side was a bit scuff but I understand needing a way that is some what believable that would make the characters might want to interact.
Speaking of one parent to the next same thing with dad why he was there he was not a major role that was constantly on screen rather taking the supporting back role there to cheer the main character up. It goes to show how parents have so little actually in our lives later on but also want to still be there even if thier not sure how.
And it goes to show the contrast between a good parent and a bad one.
The ending was sweet but about what about what i expected out of this well one of the two options I assumed when they talked about last year. (The other was they ended up going to the same college BS) But I am glad it went this path and it was sweet.
I downloaded it for the love story got more interested in and stayed interested for the mystery and left with both a mystery and a somewhat sweet love story.
I loveeed this story, it was so beautifully done! I loved how the characters were not perfect but still very lovable, I laughed and cried while reading this. I know that you just finished and you should take some time to yourself but I will definitely play anything that you pull out cuz I just loved your writing style and how you portray your characters <3
-Spoiler-
for me the only thing that left me with a sour taste was how the mc handled the situation with his ex, I know that he was trying to get through his thick skull once and for all that they were done but at the same time he was an addict and didn't have a support system so I think mc could have emphasize more how he still care for him as a friend, how his sister is still waiting for him, so maybe he could have fleed the town after talking with his sister and explained how he is going to get treatment and comeback or something like that, I just feel that he kind gave up on him and he was the only person besides his little sister that he could count on, I know it's not his problem and he shouldn't have to go thru all this for his ex but at the same time I think it would be more fitting to his personality and would be less sad cuz after the talk that they had I just kept thinking about how he is probably going to loose to the drugs and how his little sister may never see him again :c but at the same time, this is your story to tell so you should do you, I just needed to put my two cents on this cuz I loved how everything else came about, I hope this don't come off as meaning or arrogant but english is not my native language so just know that if sounded bad it wasn't my intention haha hope you are doing fine and happy with how everything came about, you did an amazing job <3
Android?
A masterpiece. From the music, characters, scenes. Everything is so well done. God the music was on point with every scene..
God... Chapter 10 KILLED me T____T I was so badly on edge! xD wow, what great writing xou've put into the 2econd act of xour VN :) especially with Callum's mother ;)
I've enjoyed this tale from the very 1irst build, and it's been amazing to follow xour progress as a writer n__n this story has such deep emotions in it, and xou pervay them so well that I feel each and every 1ne perfectly~ UwU
I CANNOT wait for the conclusion, and will likely re-read a few earlier chapters to get that whole build up going~ :p thank xou SOOOO much for sharing xour tale with us, it's been a freaking wild ride :)
Is there a android versión?
Hey, you have plans in making a discord account or a server?
well ive thought abt it, but im not really sure how to set one up properly... maybe if i had someone to help me run it, since i dont use discord too often, but its def something id like to do! :0
You should do it, a friends i have are making a stream about your novel in a server.
oh my gosh, really? i'll try to do it as soon as possible! that's so exciting!! (^w^)/
Glady i invite you, is call FVN server but the wait to enter is around one day.
Well funny you recommended this but I won't be able to check it out yet
I just started playing this and god I related to Callum so much just as much for the MC in Socially Awkward. Watching people talked really do feel like you watching a love sitcom. Though my heart fucking drop when Karina told Callum she love Marcus. I'm a basic bitch that love basic cliché of Jock x Nerd, Marcus is really the ideal VN love interest to me and the fact that this chick who I love cause her personality is total diva, said she love him means possible friendship ender for the best girl there ever is. And I can't. I don't care if it's spoiler, please tell me Callum will still be friend with Karina if he ended up with Marcus.
Excuse me, But you are using copyright music. That can be a legal and court troubles for you (Specially when your patreon is involve), can i ask you to remove it?. Many also have the same worry with the music.
Hello,
He is referring mostly to the Taylor Swift music.
Exactly, thanks Unagi UWU
aa yeah, i guess i was pushing it a little, i just really wanted that music in (*=3=) i'll try and replace them as soon as i can..!
Thanks for you understanding X3
The beginning of this guide mentions important things for VN creators such as attributions and Creative Commons
https://minoh.itch.io/minotaur-hotel/devlog/209741/the-budget-friendly-journey-to-get-good-music-for-an-indie-game-and-our-experience-with-ilicensemusic
How much does Marcus weigh?
230 lbs!
More to love I say
How tall is Marcus?
6'3!
I used joiplay to play this again and I reread ch 1-6 and just started on ch 7 and holy fuck the change in art style gave me fucking whiplash (
im kinda simping for the new Mr Diaz Cg ngl)I wish I could play this this was one of my favorite VN's and since my laptop broke I'm now stuck with just my phone to play VN's 😕