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I fell in love with this vn so so much that I got attached to all the characters especially David, I thought he and Callum would end up together but no , I felt bad for David 😭 but I still love the ending though 10/10

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Simplemente una de las mejores novelas visuales. realmente estoy conmovida por todo lo que pasó, derramé muchas lágrimas TwT. ¡Gracias creador! Sin ti nunca tendríamos esta obra de arte :)

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muchas gracias!! me alegra mucho que te haya gustado tanto <3

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Ridiculously underrated vn and vn developer. I've played a few fvns lol but the writing of this is genuinely exceptional. Some of the best romance writing I've ever seen and the MYSTERY?? THE MYSTERY??? I was hooked! It's so hard to find finished fvns and I'm genuinely shocked I hadn't heard of this, I had to find it on Patreon after getting hooked on What It Feels Like. If you're on the fence or whatever, do yourself a favor and play this immediately.

this is literally the nicest comment ive ever gotten qwq ty sososo much, your words mean the world to me…!!!!

Okay I love this game but.....this might be weird but I would've chose David DONT BLAME ME I enjoyed him sad I couldn't

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I NEED MORREEEE

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I really loved it everything about it i just imagen marcus and cal meets again in the future and the whole gang back together over all this was great       (*゚∀゚)っ  (*つ´・∀・)つ

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The VN looks realy cool, but i have a Android phone...

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android build is up!! :>

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Thanks!!! 😊

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Marcus and Callum should let Baxter in on the fun sometime cuz that boy is the unsung hero of this story and he deserves a thank you BJ.  >w>

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i think you might get your wish sooner than you think (owo)b

wait how many routes are there?

just one, its a linear visual novel :]

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Spoiler Warning. Do not read if you have not played through the VN Already I am talking about my thoughts on this game.

I enjoyed the realism in this story or about as real as a love story between two lovers with one trying to solve a mystery could get.
I am so glad that it did not go down the I found this guy and it will all be fine but rather a more real world approach... Albeit a bit scuffed with some of the story points through it.
I did enjoy the going and finding david though I feel the entire interaction with him was a bit scuffed including the part where they arived at Marcuses house... Kinda felt like a Yandere thing and it just didn't feel resolved. Though if that was plan then good job and I can totally see that being the plan like not ever story has to be resolved or come to a wonderful outcome.
Sometimes life is about taking what you can get and focusing on those who actually care or you and are willing to accept you and those who you love instead of the abusive friendship that won't end well.
Another thing I enjoyed was how the drama with the mother was short and sweet not over staying its welcome.
Albeit the thing with it getting aster on our side was a bit scuff but I understand needing a way that is some what believable that would make the characters might want to interact.
Speaking of one parent to the next same thing with dad why he was there he was not a major role that was constantly on screen rather taking the supporting back role there to cheer the main character up. It goes to show how parents have so little actually in our lives later on but also want to still be there even if thier not sure how.
And it goes to show the contrast between a good parent and a bad one.
The ending was sweet but about what about what i expected out of this well one of the two options I assumed when they talked about last year. (The other was they ended up going to the same college BS) But I am glad it went this path and it was sweet.
I downloaded it for the love story got more interested in and stayed interested for the mystery and left with both a mystery and a somewhat sweet love story.

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I loveeed this story, it was so beautifully done! I loved how the characters were not perfect but still very lovable, I laughed and cried while reading this. I know that you just finished and you should take some time to yourself but I will definitely play anything that you pull out cuz I just loved your writing style and how you portray your characters <3

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for me the only thing that left me with a sour taste was how the mc handled the situation with his ex, I know that he was trying to get through his thick skull once and for all that they were done but at the same time he was an addict and didn't have a support system so I think mc could have emphasize more how he still care for him as a friend, how his sister is still waiting for him, so maybe he could have fleed the town after talking with his sister and explained how he is going to get treatment and comeback or something like that, I just feel that he kind gave up on him and he was the only person besides his little sister that he could count on, I know it's not his problem and he shouldn't have to go thru all this for his ex but at the same time I think it would be more fitting to his personality and would be less sad cuz after the talk that they had I just kept thinking about how he is probably going to loose to the drugs and how his little sister may never see him again :c but at the same time, this is your story to tell so you should do you, I just needed to put my two cents on this cuz I loved how everything else came about, I hope this don't come off as meaning or arrogant but english is not my native language so just know that if sounded bad it wasn't my intention haha hope you are doing fine and happy with how everything came about, you did an amazing job <3

Android?

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A masterpiece. From the music, characters, scenes. Everything is so well done. God the music was on point with every scene..

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God... Chapter 10 KILLED me T____T I was so badly on edge! xD wow, what great writing xou've put into the 2econd act of xour VN :) especially with Callum's mother ;)

I've enjoyed this tale from the very 1irst build, and it's been amazing to follow xour progress as a writer n__n this story has such deep emotions in it, and xou pervay them so well that I feel each and every 1ne perfectly~ UwU

I CANNOT wait for the conclusion, and will likely re-read a few earlier chapters to get that whole build up going~ :p thank xou SOOOO much for sharing xour tale with us, it's been a freaking wild ride :)

Is there a android versión?

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Hey, you have plans in making a discord account or a server?

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well ive thought abt it, but im not really sure how to set one up properly... maybe if i had someone to help me run it, since i dont use discord too often, but its def something id like to do! :0

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You should do it, a friends i have are making a stream about your novel in a  server.

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oh my gosh, really? i'll try to do it as soon as possible! that's so exciting!! (^w^)/

Glady i invite you, is call FVN server but the wait to enter is around one day.

Well funny you recommended this but I won't be able to check it out yet

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I just started playing this and god I related to Callum so much just as much for the MC in Socially Awkward. Watching people talked really do feel like you watching a love sitcom. Though my heart fucking drop when Karina told Callum she love Marcus. I'm a basic bitch that love basic cliché of Jock x Nerd, Marcus is really the ideal VN love interest to me and the fact that this chick who I love cause her personality is total diva, said she love him means possible friendship ender for the best girl there ever is. And I can't. I don't care if it's spoiler, please tell me Callum will still be friend with Karina if he ended up with Marcus.

Excuse me, But you are using copyright music. That can be a legal and court troubles for you (Specially when your patreon is involve), can i ask you to remove it?. Many also have the same worry with the music.

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Hello,

He is referring mostly to the Taylor Swift music.

Exactly, thanks Unagi UWU

aa yeah, i guess i was pushing it a little, i just really wanted that music in (*=3=) i'll try and replace them as soon as i can..!

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Thanks for you understanding X3

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The beginning of this guide mentions important things for VN creators such as attributions and Creative Commons

https://minoh.itch.io/minotaur-hotel/devlog/209741/the-budget-friendly-journey-to-get-good-music-for-an-indie-game-and-our-experience-with-ilicensemusic

How much does Marcus weigh?

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230 lbs!

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More to love I say

How tall is Marcus?

6'3!

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I used joiplay to play this again and I reread ch 1-6 and just started on ch 7 and holy fuck the change in art style gave me fucking whiplash (im kinda simping for the new Mr Diaz Cg ngl)

I wish I could play this this was one of my favorite VN's and since my laptop broke I'm now stuck with just my phone to play VN's 😕

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