This is one of those very cases when it is simply impossible not to leave a review. I came across this VN from a short game page for a game jam and, to be honest, I wasn't expecting anything big. And how wrong I was...
At first the story hooked me, but not much. But I gave it a chance and continued reading. and I'm incredibly glad I did it. the story is alive, each character feels real, and the relationships draw you in so much, as if you were standing next to them and experiencing it all with them. I really like the storytelling style and the issues that are raised in it. many of the thoughts and feelings that went into this VN were very close to me and made me truly empathize with the course of the story.
But if only the characters had sunk into my soul, I wouldn’t have written a review. Music. Lord God, I really want to thank and praise all those people who wrote the music for this VN. And not only music, but entire songs! Songs! In a visual novel about a musical gang! It would seem that there is nothing to be surprised about, but it simply amazed me incredibly. Thank you more for being such great guys, I can’t.
I can’t help but praise the visual component of the novel, because it completely complemented and improved the set: “I see, I hear, I feel.” Well-developed characters, it is clear that a piece of soul was invested in creating each of them. When I see them smiling, crying, being shy, thinking, I feel them alive and so close to my heart.
I just finished reading chapter 5 and can't wait for the next one. Thank you for hooking me on such a powerful drug, I can’t help but praise your drug-dealing abilities. all the feelings that I cannot express in words, all the smiles, laughter, awe and tears caused by reading this VN are entirely due to those involved in this project. I really want to know how everything will develop further and I madly support this project. I am very sorry that I cannot support the authors financially due to some difficult circumstances. so all I can do is support you with a kind word, write this review, and pray for the health and happiness of everyone involved in this project.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's not too selfish to ask for something in return for some short review and a very dry description of the feelings I had reading this VN. (If I could express my thoughts coherently, I’m afraid the review would turn into a multi-page collection of thoughts about everything that touched my soul, haha). Thank you for reading all the way to here, I love you and your work madly. (I really hope that Google Translate allowed me to express my thoughts clearly in another language and it is still readable).
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ok, that's it, stop. I don’t know how to end this review, so I’ll write a joke. What did the blind man say when he walked into the bar? "Long time no see you guys"
thank you for such a sweet, long review, im so glad youre enjoying the story so far :3 I’m the only author, artist and songwriter for the VN, although the music is made by various other talented musicians! I’m really happy that my words were able to connect with you, it seriously means the absolute world to me!
I don't know why but I thought this story was finished. So imagine the gasp of a sheer, immense despair that I released when I was graced with a "To be continued". Don't know if this is favorite territory just yet... but this is quite possibly the most "Blue-balled" I have felt after an update in quite a while. Im thoroughly impressed with the writing style and the comedic at times yet thorough expression that have been given to these characters and I suppose. I got a lot of good laughs, second-hand embarrassment and plenty of entertainment from what is so far done. I'm looking forward to other VN's you have made or will make along with the continuation of this on.
I LOVE IT SO MUCH, LIKE IT'S SO GOOD AND RELATABLE LIKE WHYYYY T^T AND I HC MYLO AND BAXTER GOING TO CALLIE AND MARKIE'S WEDDING. AND JUST OMG I'D LOOVVEEEE TO SEE A CROSS-OVER BUT IT'S ALREADY GOOD AS IT IS!! REALLY!!!
But seriously, gorgeous work. And take your time (≧▽≦)
Hello, where can I contact you to send material that has already been translated and discuss a couple of aspects? (I can give my telegram or start a tweeter)
I recently finished chapter 5 and I can really say that this VN is good I really liked they reused Baxter and I liked this happened after the events of the previous VN .10/10 so far I can't wait for the new chapters and I really liked there is song in the VN so unique I can't even think how long I can wait tho
Hi, I really liked this VN. So I would like to know if there is any way I can help translate it from English to Russian? To make more people see this creation! (Free of course) I really enjoyed the story. Hope for feedback!
In any case, when I finish the translation, did you have an idea to add Russian to the game itself so that it could be chosen? or the game does not support other languages? (I just have a lot of friends who don't know English and don't understand :p)
Hi, just wanted to let you know that the translation is in full swing. But I would like to know where I can send you the initial data (menu and other words) that already translated. Do you have it and could you send me the full text so that I can watch it outside the game. In general, where could we contact each other? Thank you in advance.
I just saw this at random and thought "fuck it, I'ma read it". I wish I've done it sooner cuz damn, never knew I could despise a Vn character so much. And Baxter is hella cute
God, I jumped into this with mild expectations but wow. I'm in love with the story, the characters, the songs and writing...
Mylo's situation is an all too familiar one, but seeing him slowly feel all the affection that he has wanted for the past 8 months is so satisfying. Reading as he got into that car made me want to pull my hair out, but I was hooked, then the text the morning after... Wow. Cannot say I wasn't disappointed in Mylo for falling for it again, also cannot say I wasn't disappointed the chapter ended there. Cannot wait for May 5th! I'm really excited to see what you have cooked up as the story continues!
Hard to put into words, but your writing feels real and raw. Conveys the emotion well and the characters are very charming. Love your work and always am excited to see what you make next.
It hurts to see Mylo like this. I've been through something similar and it was really bad for me... This guy simply doesn't deserve Mylo. I hope Mylo sees this and stops giving himself to him ;-;
He could be alone for a while and focus on his own things, or that other guy could stop messing around with Mylo and actually get serious about dating him... TwT
Real but I fr wanna see angst. I want to Mylo to see Dahlia and Baxter hanging out and seeing/eavesdropping/spying them at the wrong time, where like Dahlia impulsively kisses Baxter and gaaawwddd. Mylo just leaves in an instant and cries while walking away cus' he can't hold it anymore. LIKE THAT WOULD BE SO YUMMY I LOVE ANGST SORRY I'M JUST ALLERGIC TO KINDNESS (Not really, I just love seeing misunderstandings)
I am really enjoying this VN, but I would like to give this "Jakob" a taste of a cars bumper, like he's so mean to Mylo, all Mylo wants to be loved and Baxter can do that for him the new update made me have mixed feelings that Jakob will finely show Mylo affection back but to my surprise with a cliff hanger of what will happen next, I would like to see what happens next. Again I say I loved very moment of this VN and can't wait in suspense to see what happens next. <33 Great job to the creator making this can't wait to see more :D
I need to know where I can find the song that plays during their show. It instantly reminded me of Supersoaker by Kings of Leon and I fell in love with it! A full version of it where I could listen to it during my day would be amazing!!! Always looking forward to each update of this VN!
I was expecting something good but I was still completely blown away! I can't wait to see where the story goes next. Please keep updating this gem of a VN.
Sat down to read and never looked away as soon as I started. Its already really raw. Cuts right to the core and never lets up. Extremely excited to see where this goes. I really enjoy the characters and art! I'm not saying that to be nice, I genuinely do.
I’ve just finished the update, and I can confidently say that I wasn’t disappointed at all. You have Mylo starting to move on, Baxter being his wonderful self, and of course new content for us to read and love. And I definitely loved it alright. I have zero regrets getting the VN. And I have virtually nothing to complain about. I do hope we get another update sometime soon. As I’d love to see more from the VN. It’s currently been the highlight of my rather boring week. And I don’t think I’m alone when I say I’d very much enjoy seeing more of our two boys. And the art made things comedic and enjoyable. I can safely say, the VN is great :)
Just finished playing through both chapters and I love this Baxter boy with all my heart, he's so funny and adorable. As for Jakob...the less said the better, it felt really uncomfortable to get a CG of the sex after how he treated/manipulated Mylo in the scene leading up to it. (Props if that uncomfortable feeling was intentional)
I love this a lot it made me cry way more then I thought it would because of similar experiences and I love this and can't wait to see where this goes.
As frustrating as Mylo was in this chapter, it's actually understandable. Like, toxic relationships aren't easy to get out of, and the way that Jakob makes him promise that he loves him in the way that he does isn't normal.
Also, Mylo's self destructive tendencies of pushing people away + attaching himself to Jakob just makes it feel that much more realistic.
Well it's quite intense poor little guy life is not easy for him I hope that in the next updates and the next chapters we will see him a little more joyful in all cases good job
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This is one of those very cases when it is simply impossible not to leave a review. I came across this VN from a short game page for a game jam and, to be honest, I wasn't expecting anything big. And how wrong I was...
At first the story hooked me, but not much. But I gave it a chance and continued reading. and I'm incredibly glad I did it. the story is alive, each character feels real, and the relationships draw you in so much, as if you were standing next to them and experiencing it all with them. I really like the storytelling style and the issues that are raised in it. many of the thoughts and feelings that went into this VN were very close to me and made me truly empathize with the course of the story.
But if only the characters had sunk into my soul, I wouldn’t have written a review. Music. Lord God, I really want to thank and praise all those people who wrote the music for this VN. And not only music, but entire songs! Songs! In a visual novel about a musical gang! It would seem that there is nothing to be surprised about, but it simply amazed me incredibly. Thank you more for being such great guys, I can’t.
I can’t help but praise the visual component of the novel, because it completely complemented and improved the set: “I see, I hear, I feel.” Well-developed characters, it is clear that a piece of soul was invested in creating each of them. When I see them smiling, crying, being shy, thinking, I feel them alive and so close to my heart.
I just finished reading chapter 5 and can't wait for the next one. Thank you for hooking me on such a powerful drug, I can’t help but praise your drug-dealing abilities. all the feelings that I cannot express in words, all the smiles, laughter, awe and tears caused by reading this VN are entirely due to those involved in this project. I really want to know how everything will develop further and I madly support this project. I am very sorry that I cannot support the authors financially due to some difficult circumstances. so all I can do is support you with a kind word, write this review, and pray for the health and happiness of everyone involved in this project.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's not too selfish to ask for something in return for some short review and a very dry description of the feelings I had reading this VN. (If I could express my thoughts coherently, I’m afraid the review would turn into a multi-page collection of thoughts about everything that touched my soul, haha). Thank you for reading all the way to here, I love you and your work madly. (I really hope that Google Translate allowed me to express my thoughts clearly in another language and it is still readable).
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ok, that's it, stop. I don’t know how to end this review, so I’ll write a joke. What did the blind man say when he walked into the bar? "Long time no see you guys"
...
Sorry.
thank you for such a sweet, long review, im so glad youre enjoying the story so far :3 I’m the only author, artist and songwriter for the VN, although the music is made by various other talented musicians! I’m really happy that my words were able to connect with you, it seriously means the absolute world to me!
RAAAHHH SO REAL
I don't know why but I thought this story was finished. So imagine the gasp of a sheer, immense despair that I released when I was graced with a "To be continued". Don't know if this is favorite territory just yet... but this is quite possibly the most "Blue-balled" I have felt after an update in quite a while. Im thoroughly impressed with the writing style and the comedic at times yet thorough expression that have been given to these characters and I suppose. I got a lot of good laughs, second-hand embarrassment and plenty of entertainment from what is so far done. I'm looking forward to other VN's you have made or will make along with the continuation of this on.
I LOVE IT SO MUCH, LIKE IT'S SO GOOD AND RELATABLE LIKE WHYYYY T^T AND I HC MYLO AND BAXTER GOING TO CALLIE AND MARKIE'S WEDDING. AND JUST OMG I'D LOOVVEEEE TO SEE A CROSS-OVER BUT IT'S ALREADY GOOD AS IT IS!! REALLY!!!
But seriously, gorgeous work. And take your time (≧▽≦)
I think this is the best thing I've ever read konpeito you are awesome
Hello, where can I contact you to send material that has already been translated and discuss a couple of aspects? (I can give my telegram or start a tweeter)
hi! sorry for getting back to you so late, you can dm me on twitter or discord! you can join our server for the latter :]
Hello! My discord "VoiceFromTheAbyss", add me
I am now craving more of this story. I want Mylo and Baxter dating for real!
wth i missed an update?!?!?! havent read the upd yet but I know it will be AWESOME!!! keep up the good work and good luck on the may event!
I recently finished chapter 5 and I can really say that this VN is good I really liked they reused Baxter and I liked this happened after the events of the previous VN .10/10 so far I can't wait for the new chapters and I really liked there is song in the VN so unique I can't even think how long I can wait tho
Then again I am patient.
Keep up the good work =)
Hi, is this a linear story, or does it contain choice options?
hi! its linear :] no major choices here
Hi, I really liked this VN. So I would like to know if there is any way I can help translate it from English to Russian? To make more people see this creation! (Free of course) I really enjoyed the story. Hope for feedback!
hi, tysm! yes ofc you can translate it if you'd like, please go ahead!
Thank you, I'm very grateful for that!
In any case, when I finish the translation, did you have an idea to add Russian to the game itself so that it could be chosen? or the game does not support other languages? (I just have a lot of friends who don't know English and don't understand :p)
if you could provide it to me, i have no problem adding the translation to the game!
It will be an honor for me. Thank you :)
Hi, just wanted to let you know that the translation is in full swing. But I would like to know where I can send you the initial data (menu and other words) that already translated. Do you have it and could you send me the full text so that I can watch it outside the game. In general, where could we contact each other? Thank you in advance.
Great work on chapter 5! very good at conveying the longing and emotion in general
I just saw this at random and thought "fuck it, I'ma read it". I wish I've done it sooner cuz damn, never knew I could despise a Vn character so much. And Baxter is hella cute
God, I jumped into this with mild expectations but wow. I'm in love with the story, the characters, the songs and writing...
Mylo's situation is an all too familiar one, but seeing him slowly feel all the affection that he has wanted for the past 8 months is so satisfying. Reading as he got into that car made me want to pull my hair out, but I was hooked, then the text the morning after... Wow. Cannot say I wasn't disappointed in Mylo for falling for it again, also cannot say I wasn't disappointed the chapter ended there. Cannot wait for May 5th! I'm really excited to see what you have cooked up as the story continues!
Chapter 4 was great, the music was awesome!
Hard to put into words, but your writing feels real and raw. Conveys the emotion well and the characters are very charming. Love your work and always am excited to see what you make next.
It hurts to see Mylo like this. I've been through something similar and it was really bad for me... This guy simply doesn't deserve Mylo. I hope Mylo sees this and stops giving himself to him ;-;
He could be alone for a while and focus on his own things, or that other guy could stop messing around with Mylo and actually get serious about dating him... TwT
Real but I fr wanna see angst. I want to Mylo to see Dahlia and Baxter hanging out and seeing/eavesdropping/spying them at the wrong time, where like Dahlia impulsively kisses Baxter and gaaawwddd. Mylo just leaves in an instant and cries while walking away cus' he can't hold it anymore. LIKE THAT WOULD BE SO YUMMY I LOVE ANGST SORRY I'M JUST ALLERGIC TO KINDNESS (Not really, I just love seeing misunderstandings)
Omg I read a bit from your first vn you posted and realized who Baxter, Callum and Marcus are. This is perfect 🫨 excited to continue the first vn!!
I LOVE THIS!!, cant wait to see more of it! (baxter is so wholesome, big green flag)
GURL He's not just a green flag, he's romantic and THE perfect boyfriend material ✨
I am really enjoying this VN, but I would like to give this "Jakob" a taste of a cars bumper, like he's so mean to Mylo, all Mylo wants to be loved and Baxter can do that for him the new update made me have mixed feelings that Jakob will finely show Mylo affection back but to my surprise with a cliff hanger of what will happen next, I would like to see what happens next. Again I say I loved very moment of this VN and can't wait in suspense to see what happens next. <33 Great job to the creator making this can't wait to see more :D
Alright ive had enough of this. Someone give me Jacobs address I need to give a word or twelve to his kneecaps...
I'm sooo invested in the story right now ;0; this vn is much better than I thought. Baxter in new outfit is very HOT.
I need to know where I can find the song that plays during their show. It instantly reminded me of Supersoaker by Kings of Leon and I fell in love with it! A full version of it where I could listen to it during my day would be amazing!!! Always looking forward to each update of this VN!
its on the soundtrack playlist linked here! the most recent one added :]
OMG Thank You so much!!!!! I don't know how I missed the soundtrack link! Seeing that link definitely makes me so much happier!
I was expecting something good but I was still completely blown away! I can't wait to see where the story goes next. Please keep updating this gem of a VN.
Is it the same Dexter from the other one? Also when's the next update
Sat down to read and never looked away as soon as I started. Its already really raw. Cuts right to the core and never lets up. Extremely excited to see where this goes. I really enjoy the characters and art! I'm not saying that to be nice, I genuinely do.
Wonderful VN already. Keep up the amazing work.
I need more to fill my delulu! T-T
But on a more serious note, love everything from the art style, the writing, to the music. Anxiously excited waiting for the next updates! :3
Just read through Ch3 and holy I love it!!!
*Makes eyeballs snort update*
GIVE ME MORE!!!
seriously your stories are truly engrossing. The callback was cute if sobering on the uncertainty of a relationship long distance or otherwise.
This update was so good 😭
I’ve just finished the update, and I can confidently say that I wasn’t disappointed at all. You have Mylo starting to move on, Baxter being his wonderful self, and of course new content for us to read and love. And I definitely loved it alright. I have zero regrets getting the VN. And I have virtually nothing to complain about. I do hope we get another update sometime soon. As I’d love to see more from the VN. It’s currently been the highlight of my rather boring week. And I don’t think I’m alone when I say I’d very much enjoy seeing more of our two boys. And the art made things comedic and enjoyable. I can safely say, the VN is great :)
Till the next update!
Wake up babe, konpietocat dropped an update
AND IM DEVOURING ALL OF IT
(Spoilers for both chapters)
Just finished playing through both chapters and I love this Baxter boy with all my heart, he's so funny and adorable. As for Jakob...the less said the better, it felt really uncomfortable to get a CG of the sex after how he treated/manipulated Mylo in the scene leading up to it. (Props if that uncomfortable feeling was intentional)
Recently found this VN and looks forward to future chapters! It's so good! Hope to see more soon!
I love this a lot it made me cry way more then I thought it would because of similar experiences and I love this and can't wait to see where this goes.
Baxter...
Baxter???
Backter..?
Backstab..?
BACKSTABBER?!?!?!?
(Yes, I'm paranoid and I don't fully trust him yet but goddamn I hate how he's charming himbo that he is.)
this is so keshaaa
We will slay it through together guys.
I hate it so much 10/10 I cant wait for the next update where I can be sad about a dog and his crumbling social lif
Baxter Is everything omg i love him :)
I love how well written this vn is and also how relatable Mylo is
Chapter 2 spoilers!
As frustrating as Mylo was in this chapter, it's actually understandable. Like, toxic relationships aren't easy to get out of, and the way that Jakob makes him promise that he loves him in the way that he does isn't normal.
Also, Mylo's self destructive tendencies of pushing people away + attaching himself to Jakob just makes it feel that much more realistic.
In short, very good chapter!
one of the few well-written VNs i've read. i could really feel the feelings you are trying to portray behind those words. looking forward for more.
i know that mylo will probably end up with baxter, but i hope the girl that baxter is chasing (already forgot her name lol) won't be left in the dust.
Well it's quite intense poor little guy life is not easy for him I hope that in the next updates and the next chapters we will see him a little more joyful in all cases good job
I don't think we're talking about the same love if you saw the NSFW passage I don't think it's love 😦
:(