After finishing this, I gotta say the storytelling, plot, writing, and music are all incredible. It was such a wonderful and immersive experience, and I had a blast playing this visual novel. I'd give it a solid 9.6 out of 10!
This VN hit me very hard. It isn't easy to see "your" life written down by someone else. More like an unexpected gut punch. But that means it was written perfectly. And it was somewhat cathartic in my case, albeit 2 decades too late. Having said that, this is one of the best VNs I have read so far. I would give it 25 stars if I could.
Wow. Just read the whole story and it's amazing. I can't believe how invested I got into it. It's a little predictable but it didn't make it any less enjoyable. Absolutely recommend this to anyone who enjoys slice of live and romance.
I know this is a pretty hard and time-consuming thing to do but like... what if Callum and his friends (and side characters) came to hang out with Baxter, Mylo, and their friends? Tbh i just wanna know how Dave's sister is doing and finish up the, like, 6 side-stories for the other characters along with Smoke + David. Not gonna lie, I mainly just wanna see Dave's sister and Troy interacting with Mylo alongside their friends lol. ALSO ALSO 10/10 would read 38 more times and cry each time :3
This VN is amazing. The writing, the music, the characters, the story. Literally everything!
I've read "When I Knew You" before this one which I loved it, and then when I saw that this one from the same creator I gave it a try... The moment I saw Baxter I sent my friend a full on paragraph of lore about both VNs to explain to her why I was so happy to see Baxter... That was me about 4 months ago.
Well suffice to say the story is amazing, made me smile, laugh, cry and everything in-between. I'm really happy for the ending Mylo and Baxter truly deserve happiness. I'm also happy because we got to see recurring characters and see a bit more of Marcus and Callum which is always great!
You did a very good job with this, and I can't wait to see what other projects you have in mind! Best of luck to you Konpeito!
The ending, very perfect… I jumped in my room and yelled at my boyfriend that Mylo got the perfect ending and had such a good chapter, I was so happy, I felt like I was alive, I never felt so happy about a novel before. Thank you. Your writing was hella fire and very hot.
What a great story! ☺️ I enjoyed this as much as “When I Knew You”, if not a little more~ 😌 This tale is more mature in perspective than the first VN xou created - one which made me fall in love with xour writing style - but that definitely translates into the thought process of each MC from both VNs, which I believe is the hallmark of a good writer: being able to immerse readers in the lead character’s perspective 🙂
Xou do an amazing job of invoking strong emotions 😁 thank xou for sharing this captivating story with us 💜
I got to say that was a great read! Thier were times i yelled, cried, and wore a stupid grin reading this! The pacing felt just right to me and the story was thoughtfully made and written. The ending felt right. It wasn't just pushed to the side and the talk felt real in a sense(you know?).
Each character had thier own personality and one did not feel as if they overshadowed another. Perhaps the self doubt was pushed a bit much, but i would understand why you chose that approach. Perhaps to make the reader understand our mc better on a more personal level.
The writing felt just write for me personally. it had emotions and thought put behind each sentence. Not once was i bored or tired of reading through this story you've ccreated. I hope to read more from you in the future. Short or long I know I'll enjoy what you create.
With that, all i've got to say... so, That's What It Feels Like~
Man that was amazing!! Best way to end off 2024. Please I gotta know if youre planning another project? These have been some of the best written and consistent stories I've read in forever! Love your work.
I must say, I really liked this conclusion, that Mylo and Baxter managed to finally talk it our properly, and nice reference to When I Knew You. Makes me consider downloading that to know what happened before and how this novel connected to that.
All in all, I love this story so much...and I'll wait for the next novel you have planned. :D
Quick question though, what are those 3 photos atop the CGs of Mylo during the beginning parts of the story? :o
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After finishing this, I gotta say the storytelling, plot, writing, and music are all incredible. It was such a wonderful and immersive experience, and I had a blast playing this visual novel. I'd give it a solid 9.6 out of 10!
Toradora 2: gay fur punk rock
This VN hit me very hard. It isn't easy to see "your" life written down by someone else. More like an unexpected gut punch. But that means it was written perfectly. And it was somewhat cathartic in my case, albeit 2 decades too late. Having said that, this is one of the best VNs I have read so far. I would give it 25 stars if I could.
Wow. Just read the whole story and it's amazing. I can't believe how invested I got into it. It's a little predictable but it didn't make it any less enjoyable. Absolutely recommend this to anyone who enjoys slice of live and romance.
This gave me depression in the good way (this means thah i actually loved it and it was so extremely good written that i might have drepession now)
Just re read this to ugly cry and its still peak
you ate ngl I LOVE THIS VN SO MUCH ILL DEFEND IT WITH MY WHOLE LIFE (the story complexity is just chefs kiss)
I know this is a pretty hard and time-consuming thing to do but like... what if Callum and his friends (and side characters) came to hang out with Baxter, Mylo, and their friends? Tbh i just wanna know how Dave's sister is doing and finish up the, like, 6 side-stories for the other characters along with Smoke + David. Not gonna lie, I mainly just wanna see Dave's sister and Troy interacting with Mylo alongside their friends lol. ALSO ALSO 10/10 would read 38 more times and cry each time :3
I LOVE THIS NOVEL! Thank you, it was so incredibly well written and I have become a huge fan of your writing! Thank you for this amazing story!
This VN is amazing. The writing, the music, the characters, the story. Literally everything!
I've read "When I Knew You" before this one which I loved it, and then when I saw that this one from the same creator I gave it a try... The moment I saw Baxter I sent my friend a full on paragraph of lore about both VNs to explain to her why I was so happy to see Baxter... That was me about 4 months ago.
Well suffice to say the story is amazing, made me smile, laugh, cry and everything in-between. I'm really happy for the ending Mylo and Baxter truly deserve happiness. I'm also happy because we got to see recurring characters and see a bit more of Marcus and Callum which is always great!
You did a very good job with this, and I can't wait to see what other projects you have in mind! Best of luck to you Konpeito!
The ending, very perfect… I jumped in my room and yelled at my boyfriend that Mylo got the perfect ending and had such a good chapter, I was so happy, I felt like I was alive, I never felt so happy about a novel before. Thank you. Your writing was hella fire and very hot.
9/10 scenery 10/10 writing = > total 9.5/10 > ROUNDED > 10/10!!!! 🗣️🗣️🗣️
What a great story! ☺️ I enjoyed this as much as “When I Knew You”, if not a little more~ 😌 This tale is more mature in perspective than the first VN xou created - one which made me fall in love with xour writing style - but that definitely translates into the thought process of each MC from both VNs, which I believe is the hallmark of a good writer: being able to immerse readers in the lead character’s perspective 🙂
Xou do an amazing job of invoking strong emotions 😁 thank xou for sharing this captivating story with us 💜
I got to say that was a great read! Thier were times i yelled, cried, and wore a stupid grin reading this! The pacing felt just right to me and the story was thoughtfully made and written. The ending felt right. It wasn't just pushed to the side and the talk felt real in a sense(you know?).
Each character had thier own personality and one did not feel as if they overshadowed another. Perhaps the self doubt was pushed a bit much, but i would understand why you chose that approach. Perhaps to make the reader understand our mc better on a more personal level.
The writing felt just write for me personally. it had emotions and thought put behind each sentence. Not once was i bored or tired of reading through this story you've ccreated. I hope to read more from you in the future. Short or long I know I'll enjoy what you create.
With that, all i've got to say... so, That's What It Feels Like~
I just how love that there are returning characters and I'm so happy and sad that it ended, such amazing years with the VN, good job konpeito 💜
OMG YES
This end of this wonderful story really a good kick for the beginning of the year and I look forward for your future projects
Keep on the amazing work Konpeito <3
Question: Can you download this on a iPhone?
A bit sad that it ended cause I love the characters, but happy thath it was so great.
Minor spoiler, but:
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Callum is your gaydar decorative cus wtf????? XD
Man that was amazing!! Best way to end off 2024. Please I gotta know if youre planning another project? These have been some of the best written and consistent stories I've read in forever! Love your work.
i absolutely am! this isn’t the last you’ve seen of me :3
can't wait!!
I must say, I really liked this conclusion, that Mylo and Baxter managed to finally talk it our properly, and nice reference to When I Knew You. Makes me consider downloading that to know what happened before and how this novel connected to that.
All in all, I love this story so much...and I'll wait for the next novel you have planned. :D
Quick question though, what are those 3 photos atop the CGs of Mylo during the beginning parts of the story? :o
You didn't fail to deliver.
After finishing the last chapter I wonder will the next game be in Tennessee with Jakob? 👀
Just read the final chapter. Best VN I've read.
I LOVE U. finaly the day came that we got the final chapter, i am kind of sad that it is the end tho...